Honest review of Do No Harm:

by M. B. Hampshire (Author)

Updated at: 03/02/2025

In M. B. Hampshire's "Do No Harm," the first book in the "Heir of Peace" series, Merlin Lynwood, a skilled healer, prioritizes the safety of her brother above all else. When war erupts, and her brother is conscripted, Merlin makes a vow to protect him, a promise complicated by a devastating refusal and a seemingly impossible proposition from a knight. Forced to confront her own limitations and the brutal realities of war, Merlin embarks on a perilous journey northward. Facing danger at every turn, she must decide what truly matters, balancing her vow with the potential to end the conflict before everything she holds dear is lost forever. This gripping fantasy novel explores themes of loyalty, sacrifice, and the true meaning of protection.

5 / 4 ratings

Review Do No Harm

Oh my goodness, I absolutely devoured "Do No Harm"! From the very first page, I was completely captivated by Merlin's story. M. B. Hampshire has crafted such a compelling world, brimming with magic, danger, and characters so richly developed that they felt like old friends by the end. The description mentions that in this world, some people matter more than others, and that's perfectly reflected in Merlin's unwavering devotion to her brother. That fierce protectiveness, that desperate need to keep him safe, is so powerfully portrayed, it resonated deeply with me. It's a feeling I think many readers will recognize and empathize with, even if their bonds aren't quite as fantastical as Merlin's.

The plot itself is a whirlwind of action and intrigue. There's a constant sense of rising stakes, keeping you perpetually on the edge of your seat. I found myself completely invested in Merlin's journey, desperately wanting her to succeed in her mission, even as the odds stacked against her grew increasingly daunting. The author expertly builds the suspense, layering in just enough clues to keep you guessing, but never so much as to spoil the surprises. And those surprises? Let's just say I was genuinely shocked a few times! The twists and turns kept the story incredibly fresh and exciting throughout.

Beyond the gripping plot, I absolutely adored the characters. Merlin herself is a fantastic protagonist – strong, resourceful, and utterly believable, even with her incredible healing abilities. She's not perfect, she makes mistakes, and her vulnerabilities are what make her so relatable and endearing. The supporting cast is equally well-realized; the "good guys" are truly intriguing, each with their own unique quirks and motivations, while the villains are shrouded in enough mystery to leave you both terrified and fascinated. And the dialogue! Sharp, witty, and often surprisingly humorous, it perfectly captured the tone of the story, adding another layer of enjoyment to the experience.

The world-building is another area where the book truly shines. Hampshire paints a vivid picture of the Sher Wood, the Land of Myths, making it feel both fantastical and incredibly real. You can almost smell the herbs in Merlin's garden, feel the chill of the northern winds, and hear the clash of steel in the midst of battle. The magic system, while not overly explained in exhaustive detail, is seamlessly integrated into the narrative, adding to the richness and depth of the world.

In short, "Do No Harm" is a phenomenal fantasy read. It's a perfect blend of action, adventure, and emotional depth, with characters you'll instantly fall in love with and a plot that will keep you hooked until the very last page. I laughed, I cried (a little!), and I definitely found myself on the edge of my seat more times than I can count. This is the kind of book that stays with you long after you've finished reading it, and I can’t wait to see what happens next in this captivating series. Highly, highly recommended!